First Few Chapters Review

Are you unsure if your opening chapters hook readers the way they should?

 

Do you feel like your characters need stronger introductions or clearer motivations early on?

 

Are you struggling to establish the right pacing and balance between dialogue and action in your first few chapters?

 

The beginning of your story holds great power—let’s make it irresistible. The first two to three chapters are key to holding your reader's attention. This service provides detailed, actionable feedback to help you refine and strengthen those critical opening chapters, making your story enchants your readers right from the beginning.

 

This service is also great if you’re querying.

 

What You'll Receive:

Feedback Letter

2-5+ pages with actionable steps and resources tailored to the suggestions.

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​In-line Comments

These will be placed throughout your chapters for guidance.​

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Post-Service Consultation

A 45-minutes coaching session post-feedback to discuss revisions, questions, and refine your strategy.

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Unlimited Support Through Telegram or Email

Two weeks of unlimited access to me through Telegram or email during business hours for follow-up questions as you implement your revisions.

 

Investment:

The service begins at $888, with additional fees for any extra word count beyond 20,000 words.

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*Payment plans, custom packages to meet your budget, and free consultations are available*

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Start your manuscript off strong with professional feedback and coaching tailored to your unique vision. Let's make sure your story captures readers from the very first page!